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This is a one sentence story for school project! (It's the sentence i mentioned before, "i haven't seen a kite in a couple of years, but i assume they still exist")
I don't know if my message is coming across enough, the paper's marked on how well you can convey the metaphorical meaning of your chosen sentence through visual elements.
so...~ ^_^ be my guinea pigs and tell me what you think the mesage is, or just any comments or critiques on the visual in general.
the painting's kinda rough, but i hope that comes across as something stylized rather than just me being lazy. ^,^; oh god, epic fail at drawing people and feet...=w=;; i'm glad the uni doesn't care too much about craft level
again, sorry no anime/manga arts yet, i'll upload something in the holidays, which is coming in two weeeeeeeeekS!!!! YAAAAAAAAY~~~~~
ooooh one more thing, anyone got ideas for the title of this story? ('kite" was just a random title i came up on the spot)
ooooooooooh, and i saw my teacher going on DA today. scary. XO AND she knows about manga....OWO!!!
I don't know if my message is coming across enough, the paper's marked on how well you can convey the metaphorical meaning of your chosen sentence through visual elements.
so...~ ^_^ be my guinea pigs and tell me what you think the mesage is, or just any comments or critiques on the visual in general.
the painting's kinda rough, but i hope that comes across as something stylized rather than just me being lazy. ^,^; oh god, epic fail at drawing people and feet...=w=;; i'm glad the uni doesn't care too much about craft level
again, sorry no anime/manga arts yet, i'll upload something in the holidays, which is coming in two weeeeeeeeekS!!!! YAAAAAAAAY~~~~~
ooooh one more thing, anyone got ideas for the title of this story? ('kite" was just a random title i came up on the spot)
ooooooooooh, and i saw my teacher going on DA today. scary. XO AND she knows about manga....OWO!!!
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI really like this <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/> It's as though it could tell multiple stories.. One of which is where this girl has grown up, and is now in this gray world. She remembers when she was a child, playing a laughing, playing with a kite. Maybe the kite symbolizes her childhood, her youth? And now she is in the gray world of business, a harsh world that the only games you get to play are with the bosses and only have to do with money. ^^ Or maybe its really just her thinking about kites as she walks around. Either way- it has a lot of meaning, to a lot of people, including me, and I REALLY love it.