last song

Your have technique down and it's super pretty! But I feel like that's all I see. I'm guessing here but I feel like this is supposed to be an interaction picture and unfortunately, I can't see any interaction besides the fact they're next to each other. Their expressions dont look interactive, nor do they seem like they're in the same picture. It's as if, if you seperate them, they're standalone medium shots. And when you put it together, it's still stand alone shots! I'm not really getting the momentum as much as I should have, if everything's going left, his hair still flips right and it loses the beautiful momentum of the image!

Overall, my only critique is the momentum and the illusory life of the image. The illusory life is lost because their interaction isnt there, in their expressions that aren't looking at each other but something in the distance instead.

If you havent seen it yet, there's a great tutorial on how to express and interact expressions with each other here: [link]

It's my first time critiquing and I hope it wasnt too harsh ;;; I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOUR WORK THOUGH TnT