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January 14, 2012
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last song by aiki-ame last song by aiki-ame
"my last song, can you hear?"

I suddenly have this cute idea that Mi3 can use her stripy thing as earphones...>w< (when i drew it it wasn't intentional. O_O but fitting. hahah~) Funny enough, i can't even recognise what colour i used for the guy last time. -w-;;; i'll settle for greyish brown.

wow...this is the first time i actually bother to draw my OC twice. LOL


Mi3: :iconblushplz:
guy: :iconshockplz: why you staring at my chest you freak...
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Your have technique down and it's super pretty! But I feel like that's all I see. I'm guessing here but I feel like this is supposed to be an interaction picture and unfortunately, I can't see any interaction besides the fact they're next to each other. Their expressions dont look interactive, nor do they seem like they're in the same picture. It's as if, if you seperate them, they're standalone medium shots. And when you put it together, it's still stand alone shots! I'm not really getting the momentum as much as I should have, if everything's going left, his hair still flips right and it loses the beautiful momentum of the image!

Overall, my only critique is the momentum and the illusory life of the image. The illusory life is lost because their interaction isnt there, in their expressions that aren't looking at each other but something in the distance instead.

If you havent seen it yet, there's a great tutorial on how to express and interact expressions with each other here: [link]

It's my first time critiquing and I hope it wasnt too harsh ;;; I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOUR WORK THOUGH TnT
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SquirrelyMagazine Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So amazingly beautiful. :)

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kyolovaX3 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
O gosh i get this crique but really?! I liiike this drawing.
LeoxLuna Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is amazing. I remember reading the story about them. Mi3 is dying because she's singing to find her love, but every moment she stays with him her life slips away. It's so sad. Love the picture and story though.
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dieonada Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wait....i see tears?
aiki-ame Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
>-< yesh~ finally someone spotted the tears. TWT
Jessiegr Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
This is beautiful, your digital painting is rly good!
LAELAH Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your art and coloring style is really something else Aiki <3 but I don't feel anything from these characters O__o''
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