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Mushroom girls

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this can't be more random...:iconotlplz:

dahahaa.....as i said in my recent journal, i'm doing this little practice where i choose three random things and use them to create a picture. Guess what words i got? mushroom, cardboard box, blood...pffwaahahahaha

aaahhh....so reminiscent, i remember back in year 11 (4 years back) we used to draw cardboard boxes using different medium to practice lighting....haha~
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Well then, first thing is first. I think it's good to be unique. It's one of my biggest rules and assets in art and myself and my life <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> Being unique, being special, being different from the others.

Yes, it's random, but it's creative! Life is all about being spunky and epic X3 You came up with some nice ideas!

You drew the carton boxes well, the girls' outfits kind of remind me of the circus and witches mixed up...but nevermind about that.

I dislike the expressions of the girls. It's like...they have no meaning to them. There's no LIFE. Or concept, like in your usual drawings. I guess you felt unsure since this was something new to you. ALso, the random splotch of blood? I think you could have drawn bloody footprints on some of the carton boxes, or maybe blood raining down on them.

The big mushroom the brunette is gripping? I thought it was meant as some sort of umbrella, but there were only cute, nicely drawn levitating mushrooms. I think you could've used some...SORT of object falling down from the sky.

Otherwise, great use of colors, shading, toning, proportioning, I like the boots and big ribbon of the gray haired girl's outfit, and the movement of the scarf the brunette girl is wearing.

Their poses are nice, Though I would've suggested making the brunette girl kneel, then her dress would've seemed more appealing <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>

I like this strange combination all put in this picture, but, next time, maybe think of combining only 2 random subjects first to create a picture, instead of 3? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/> Have a nice day and keep up the amazing work! I can tell you're growing ^^ <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/s/h/s…" alt=":iconshaplz:" title="Shaplz"/> Yours sincerely, your fan who hopes you reply to this soon, Cheezcakelover ^^