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February 2, 2012
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Destroy by aiki-ame Destroy by aiki-ame
"come now, let this world destroy itself."

i feel like destroying everything....like, rawr-flip-desk-destroy...

trying my hands on rpg style. LMAO

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Critique by Cheezcakelover Feb 3, 2012, 5:34:48 AM
I really loved the background and the effects and dramaticness added by the purple flaring flames, the broken scattered machines/pieces of wood/whatever they are XD and the cast out edgy particles surrounding the area of where her punch landed. It's a very POWERFUL and certainly, memorable drawing.

I love the design of her outfit, her weapon is...well, a bit too bulky but elegant and unique all the same, The shading of the lifted hand seems a bit strange...maybe the colors used?

I also noticed her waist area seems to be a bit too thick, if one arm is raised, it should be thinner, right? And somewhat stretched.

Her bare leg (the left one) also seems to be a bit....thick due to the angle of the leg beneath the knee where it is a blind spot because of the right leg. I think you needed to make sure of the angle of the leg and the ankle since it gives this...fattening effect, which happens a lot if you have a blind spot of a limb or body part.

The drama and depth of this drawing is added by the dancing movement of the purple flames somewhat shrouding her legs and the fluttering cast-off position of her scarf ends and her skirt. I find it a bit cliche that the scarf is red since that is often found on heroic types in mangas haha. ;) with that kind of fancy outfit it kind of clashes, but oh well.

Hmm....I really like her facial expression and the random stray hairstrands but what I noticed was some parts of the braid around the middle area are a bit bulbous. Or is it a bubble knot ponytail?

Oh wait, back to the face XD I noticed that in most of your drawings, unless the drawing is a close-up or the face is tilted at a specific angle, you can't see it very well...the lines are too fine, and though you can see it, you have to squint to have it be REALLY seen since your eyes get drawn to the outfit, background and etc. I think you need to make the face stick out more. Sometimes that works with characters with bold eyes that you draw.

All in all, great shading, toning, amazing creativity of yours, I love the way you draw clothes, the pose is heroic and natural which adds this smooth, moving along feeling to it, I really love her weapon and the flames a ton, and I admire your skill! :thumbsup: Keep up the amazing work! Sorry that I was picky and kept pointing out cons rather than pros haha. Have a nice day~♥
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Faithfeather Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
very gorgeous :D!!!!
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DwarfPuddle Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Wonderful! :)
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DARKandDEPRESSED Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I want her sword :3 fufufufufu
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fishontheroof Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
This is amazing!
I love your art. :D
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Zitatchi Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2012  Student General Artist
So cool and pretty! ^_^
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nasharios Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Student General Artist
this is awesome, I love the emotion
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Jessiegr Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
Dear Lord O_O

I wish I could draw just like you..
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Wonderful
Shes nice
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jcroxas Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Hi there! Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of art. You have been featured here: [link] :heart: :huggle:
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aiki-ame Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
waah~ >W< thank youuu~
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